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Post by dallasjohnson on Dec 1, 2010 23:26:25 GMT -5
Gleaming Copper
Owner Name:Karlyn Moore Owner Age: 16 Other Horses?: Nope! :]
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Registered name: Gleaming Copper Barn Name: Copper or Gleam Breed: Thoroughbred Color: Chestnut Age: 5 Gender: Gelding Height:16hh Personality Description: Calm Sweet horse. If a bomb exploded, Copper would bearly blink. History: Karlyn bought Copper when she was ten. SHE SAVED UP $400.00 and her parents paied the rest. Copper's sire: Dustless Night, and his dam: Moony He was a laied make horse, and didn't make a big deal out of things. Discipline: Flatwork and Jumping Anything else? Copper hates being the first in from the pasture, but hates being the last.
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Post by --THE JESSTER on Dec 2, 2010 12:50:48 GMT -5
The personality needs to be a full paragraph, which is a minimum of five sentences. Also, the history needs to be two paragraphs which is a minimum of ten sentences.
Other than that it's good, so just let me know when that's been fixed and I'll look it over again. [/size]
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